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Throw me up .
Push me down .
Rip me to pieces, all around .

Grin when I bleed .
Laugh when I fall .
It's not like I matter, at all .
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OkamiRyouma Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
Mhm... this poem manages to describe my inner feelings in a nutshell.
Well, I wonder if it's even okay to call it that, when it's as normal as breathing air... I guess it's closer to my personality rather than feelings.
That being said, I don't believe anyone really matters in the long run overall, but they can mean something to a specific person.
I don't know... but I can't bring myself to agree with the idea of you not mattering.
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Xanatos-Leo Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
more or less it's the feeling of not being "wanted" to someone/things in which you want to be . everyone matters to someone yes, thats true , but most people ignore that when they have their eye set on a particular crowd. its life
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qwibes Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014   Writer
I like this one! (liked more of your poems, but felt like responding on this one)
First of all, off course you matter. Everybody has this part they play in life, what you do, what you say, is ought to make some impact, anywhere, sure that matters.
Just one point of feedback on the poem itself. I find the flow very good, but at the end it sounds a little 'raffled' or rushed. I think that if you'd change the words 'at all' to 'after all', it would improve the sound. How do you think about that?(I ask you because it's about an opinion, maybe you did give those words that sound for a reason)
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Xanatos-Leo Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
mm thanks <3 I appreciate the input, and sorry for the late reply ;A; just...ya know...6 months late LOL >< im the worst Dx
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qwibes Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014   Writer
That's ok <3
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LovelyAmbey Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
But you do. To someone out there
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Xanatos-Leo Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks <3
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Mniricecakes Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
it's not much, but you matter to me
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Xanatos-Leo Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
it means a lot more then you think <3 thanks sweetheart, i think you just made my whole day *hugs* <33
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Mniricecakes Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
glad i could help
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NeroTheAwesome Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:icontearplz:

Same perspective.
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Xanatos-Leo Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
right? /:
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NeroTheAwesome Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Yup yup
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SurrealNacre Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*hugs* whats wrong Leo D:
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Xanatos-Leo Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
just felt worthless ^^ 
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SurrealNacre Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
but you're not worthless at all :O
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
That's a lie.
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Xanatos-Leo Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
;-;
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SurrealNacre Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
was just about to post that
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013
Sorry :D
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SurrealNacre Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
it's all right :XD:
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Lynnae-Madison Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Leo, you matter so much to all of us, so please don't think you don't matter :tighthug::huggle::hug::glomp::iconhug1plz:
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Xanatos-Leo Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks..
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Lynnae-Madison Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're most welcome! ^^ :hug:
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qiniu Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
.. that's not true...
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Xanatos-Leo Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
/:
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qiniu Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013
*hugs* <3
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natt00mknr Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Are you sad? If so, i hope you feel better. 
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Xanatos-Leo Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm ok ^^ just had a bad night
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natt00mknr Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm glad you are ok, but sorry you had a bad night.
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Fall-Like-Angels Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:

We wont laugh,
Wont let you fall.
Because you matter to us all.

We're not happy
Till you smile.
Why dont you stay and talk a while?
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Xanatos-Leo Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
;u; *hugs* <3333 thank you sweetheart >u< you're the best *glomps*
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Fall-Like-Angels Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem ^^ :iconglompsomethingplz::iconxanatos-leo:
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Undead-Academy Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aw that is so sad :( You do matter :iconhug1plz:
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Xanatos-Leo Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm ok (: thanks <3
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Undead-Academy Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Good to hear hope you have a happy holiday :)
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White-Eagless Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Student General Artist

*hugs you tight and whispers*

Leo, I am here, are you aright?

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Xanatos-Leo Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i'm ok ^^ 
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White-Eagless Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Student General Artist

*hugs you again*

I am glad

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