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Your eyes met mine
those iridescent doors
    into your soul

We held our breath
at first we resisted
    our hearts both stopped

But it was hard to breathe, so
we collapsed into each other
like a mad rush, or a fever
    as if we were f
           a
            ll
              i
                n
                  g
because a certain *someone* begged me to upload it xD just another cheesy poem to express my stupid romantic side T_T lol ~ <33

sorry i haven't uploaded much Dx I'm the worst ><
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VictoriWind Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Student General Artist
cause im stupid, i forgot to comment on this and i was going toooo and but yeah, sowwy TT^TT but i already told you how amazing you are at writing lol XD but anyways! you're so talented ^^ 
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Xanatos-Leo Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL it's ok xD im pretty slow when it comes to things too T_T no worries (:

and i've written better xD but thanks hon <33
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VictoriWind Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Student General Artist
thank goodness im not the only one LOL i think one time it took me 3 months to reply back to this one person TT^TT

and soooo! this is still lovely ^^ and always my pleasure, my dear :iconrubcheeksplz: <- omg toooo cute
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Fall-Like-Angels Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your poems are always epic, this is no different. ^^
And no worries about lack of uploads, this way makes up for it. ^^
Plus, we lurv ya no matter what!!
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:iconxanatos-leo:
Xanatos-Leo Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
awww you're such a sweetheart ^^ thank you ^^ *hugs* <333
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Fall-Like-Angels Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw, thanks! I try! *hugs*
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Lynnae-Madison Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! great poem bro! ^^
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:iconxanatos-leo:
Xanatos-Leo Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you <333
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Lynnae-Madison Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're most welcome! ^^ <3
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DarkDragonWarriorDDW Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool^.=.^ 
Don't worry about lack of uploads:) 
You not that bad:D
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Xanatos-Leo Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks ^^ things have been a mess over here, so uploads are gonna be few and far between T_T
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DarkDragonWarriorDDW Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem^.=.^
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qiniu Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013
heheheeee <;;;;;;;;;;;;;&;&:&:$/&/938;8;& rnglclabsj
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Xanatos-Leo Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i don't know how to process that ;A;
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qiniu Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
no one will ever know <:
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Xander-White-Wolf Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I am officially awed by this Leo ^^ it is so sweet :heart: love it <3
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Xanatos-Leo Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks, i have better ones though xD
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Xander-White-Wolf Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
you may have better ones but this pulls the heartstrings with a couple of words ^^
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Not cheesy at all. Just romantic.
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Xanatos-Leo Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks (:
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
No problem pal.
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SurrealNacre Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this isn't a cheesy poem :D this is sweet :love:
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Xanatos-Leo Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
aww thank you ^^
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SurrealNacre Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome :heart:
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natt00mknr Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I really like it. The photo and poem work together brilliantly.
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Xanatos-Leo Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you ^^ <333 *hugs*
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natt00mknr Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aw thanks! *hugs back*
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hwa-jae Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Professional General Artist
I WAS THERE WHEN YOU WROTE IT (: YOU'RE AWESOME ^^ 
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Xanatos-Leo Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YES. YES YOU WERE xDDD
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qiniu Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013
WHAT?? YOU WERE??? Dx
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hwa-jae Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Professional General Artist
YEEEEUUUUP xDDD IN STUDY HALL LOL 
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qiniu Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
No fair!! Dx I wish I were there ;-;
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hwa-jae Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Professional General Artist
HE JUST STARTED WRITING RANDOM LINES AND FORMED IT INTO THAT...IT'S WEIRD HOW HW JUST WRITE THOSE THINGS WITHOUT ANY EFFORT WHATSOEVER ;_;
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qiniu Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
Awww yep. He's a natural xD 
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hwa-jae Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Professional General Artist
MUST BE ;-;
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Mikage-sama Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like it! :D I don't think it's cheesy at all! ^^
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Xanatos-Leo Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you ^^ <333
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Mikage-sama Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're very welcome :D
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